Writing style please comment (as Always)

[Ralph Snart]

If you took an audient out of a .5 cent showing of the phantom of the opera.
Plunked him in front of a dodger vision screen,
Then suddenly played a picture of a bear or something running gonna eat 'em.

And spud drops dead!


How long after seeing the phantom of the opera would spud (had we not killed him in the name of science albeit inadvertently)continued to think and talk about the movie.

In other words how much entertainment time did he buy (would have bought)until the next time he saw a movie

lets say the movie is 85min

he spends 30 min talking about it with mrs spud 2hrs thinking about whatever

and he sees a movie lets say every other week

also consider were his discussions productive somehow
I can see why the director had blank do whatever because in the book the author ment whatever....

or:
Reliving vicariously
just describing whatever....

Now!

[Ralph Snart]

It's supposed to look like that for the most part.

once you understand the style you will see where I goofed

I know it works what I am wondering is it entertaining.

[SoulJacker]

FCK OFF U COK

[emjen]

what? your first post? I dont get it. I always think you copy and paste things from all over the internet and paste them into your posts.

[mjtate]

No speak-a the foreign!
I don't have a clue what your on about, neither do i see a point to your post. If your trying to be poetic remember something is poetic just because it is, not because the person who wrote it is trying to be poetic.

poetry is concise perfection not masturbation, your not big and your not clever.
prik.

[twister!]

I understand what people say about your posts Ralph. However, even though I rarely truly understand them they can be quite interesting. You'd probably get less verbal abuse here if you wrote in a slightly less cryptic manner.

Most of the posts on this site are nonsense anyway....